Forrest: Project A course A- Really nice finish. Beautiful project. Your work throughout the course has been very solid and I appreciate that and your effort.. There is a really nice "pop" quality buried in your work that I think will help when you are marketing wares. You seem intent upon revealing a one line of commentary or the one line joke that tags or provides some coda reference I am not always certain of this mediative gesture. That is, I appreciate the depth of information you hide or protect with the that "one line" but as an audience member I begin to doubt the force/impact of your work because of the cheapening effect such a single reference tends to make. I truly appreciated your ability to cleverly and creatively solve the problems placed before you, interpreting suggestions and creating work that was very much your own. That individuality is coupled with an ability to package that work in a way that suits others in your audience. Great Job! Congratulations on finishing! Thanks
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